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ManipulateThis Group Challenge
Challenge Theme: White on White (Level 4)


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Stock Challenge Given:

:iconnastiaosipovastock: :iconmjranum-stock: 

1) Model - [Link]

2) Doll - [Link]

Other Stock Images:

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1) Milk - [Link]

2) Room - [Link]


kindly please leave some comments
& let me know what you think..much appreciate :aww:

p/s: thank you so much guys for letting me use your great stocks.. :aww:
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TheFantaSim Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013   General Artist
Well, thanks for wanting to participate in the contest, but I would go back and look at this one a little closer. At first glance, it's a keeper, but I'm a little disappointed. You used the mannequin parts exactly the way they came in the stock, in stead of separating them and doing something more interesting. Maybe even finding some more mannequin stock to go with it. 

Then, the lighting. There is strong light hitting the mannequin parts form the left, but the light on the figure is coming from the front. You've got to explain the different light sources some how. 

Lastly, since this is white on white, I would make her whiter.


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teMan Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
First, I'm sorry to disappoint you..really..
second, thank you so much for all the feedback & advice..and ofcos for accepting my work..
I'm here not because the contest ..but its the only way to show it.. to share with others (professional)..
I'm here for sharing and learning ..I will fix it from time to time..
just let me know and share some idea so that I could improve it more better than now.. 
thanks a lot :aww:

I'm waiting for others to give feedback and share some ideas too..
that would be great..much much appreciate! 

thank you~ :heart:
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TheFantaSim Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013   General Artist
I know you're not participating only for the prizes, you've been participating pretty regularly for the last few challenges, and that's why I know what you're capable of doing. That, and I took another look into your gallery. I really like your work. 
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